This blog post, once again written in honesty, doesn’t have much of a general direction besides the fact that I would like to discuss my thoughts on the ending of the novel, as well as my general thoughts of the novel as a whole.
That’s to say, I’ll discuss the novel in general first—it was… interesting, and I don’t mean that as in “I found this book interesting!!” Quite the opposite in fact. I understand the backstory of this novel, as it was based on real events, but the way it was written was more complex than it needed to be in my honest opinion. Having two narrators in a novel is fine, but I think Ghosh’s delivery in terms of time was lacking. It was difficult to determine what was happening as there weren’t any clear signs as to a time skip in the backwards direction, like when we read about Kanai and Fokir’s mom (Kusum??) when they were younger. It felt like events were just… happening.
There were a few places in the novel that had journal entries or like, stories in them, and I just want to be completely honest and say that I was not interested in the journal entries/stories at all. Like all the way at the start of the novel at the end of the first chapter (then again, the chapters aren’t entirely clear either), there’s an entire page and a half’s worth of words that didn’t really catch my attention enough for me to find it important to read. I get maybe for the story, these were important, but they certainly don’t need to be almost two pages long. Ghosh could’ve probably used those extra pages to write a clearer ending.
I’m fine with the characters, I think they were written alright. I feel like Piya could have more of a personality, but then again she isn’t able to properly communicate with others because she doesn’t know the language, so I find it a bit understandable that she isn’t very talkative and that she seems to be absent of a personality or some expressiveness. Kanai, on the other hand, I think was pretty interesting to read, only because he has what Piya lacks—the ability to communicate, so we’re able to see Kanai interact with others and react to situations. The best example I can think of would be when Fokir and Kanai were going through the jungle and Kanai fell down in the mud after being tripped up from a “rope-like tendril”. Fokir offers to help him, but instead Kanai yells at him, “‘Ja, shuorer bachcha, beriye ja! Get away from me, you son of a pig!’” (Ghosh, 277) Kanai in this scene is very expressive, showing the emotion of anger through his words and tone of voice. During this point in the novel though, I would say that Piya had definitely become more talkative and expressive, which was nice to see considering that I like her character quite a bit—mainly because she works closely with sea animals and loves her job.
Now for the ending, I would say was a bit of a let down. I mean, content wise it was fine because Piya and Nilima sorted out Piya’s project idea, where it would also help benefit Monya and her son because she’ll get a part-time job and learn some English from Piya (who would learn Bangla in turn). However, considering what happened in the novel, I was sort of expecting there’d be some sort of romance between Piya and Kanai, where we’d get some sort of closure on their relationship, but no. Kanai wasn’t even there at the very very end of the novel, he was in another location on his way back to Lusibari (I think it was? I can’t find it at the time of writing) while Piya was having a chat with Nilima. I wish we even got more information on Piya’s project and maybe information on how it was going after a time skip, as well as checking up on Piya and Kanai’s relationship. But instead, it felt like a really annoying cliffhanger.